Monday 4 September 2017
Rylee 100WC T3W7
100WC T3W7
“It was huge, as big as a beast”... the class laughed. “Really it was furry and everything” Mrs Moore gave me the nod. I took my seat at the back of the classroom and hid under my arms. My name is Tommy, I saw the most amazing thing ever but everyone thought I was joke. At home I drew pictures of what I saw. Enormous arms grabbing to reach me, footsteps leaving traces all around. The next day to stare at the marks it had made I felt a drizzle of spit above me. I looked up, everything went black.
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