Tuesday 5 September 2017
Izzy 100WC T3W7
He’s behind me, I know he is, I can feel his breath tickle down my spine, I crawl out of the forest washed in a series of different worries. Who was this monster? I knew two things he was huge and dangerous. After stumbling across those two humongous footprints, it felt like I couldn't breathe. I stopped quickly to take a short breath soon to be towered by the monster. He looked me straight into the eye while I stood in shock, he was covered in hair with theses absolutely huge feet. That’s when I knew, I had discovered Bigfoot.
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