Thursday 21 September 2017
Connor 100WC WK8 T3
There has been a nuclear explosion where I live. So I went to investigate. It was weird because there were multicolored balls lying all over the place. I started looking through the rubble looking for survivors. I, unfortunately, couldn't find anyone. I heard sirens getting louder and louder. Half our city had already left thanks to the volcano explosion. I heard a firefighter yell "Það er fólk undir rústunum." Which means there are people under the rubble. I tried to tell the bulky fireman that there were no people. The fireman quickly escorted out of the way. How wrong was I that day? 86 people were rescued that day from the rubble.
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