Tuesday 5 September 2017
Alice 100WC T3WK7
Josh is just a boy, but with a daunting secret that no one knows…. When the clock strikes midnight every fortnight, he grows thick hair all over, razor sharp fangs and a wolf-like face.
One night he turned into a scary and ugly monster and ran off looking for dinner. What Josh didn’t know was that on his last visit, some policeman spotted him and now they were on watch. Suddenly ropes wrapped around his waist and he was pulled to the ground. Josh’s massive feet made a dent in the ground that will be there forever as a reminder.
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