Sunday 6 August 2017
Sam 100WC T3W3
“Honey can you please water the gardens they haven't been watered in a while.” “Uhhh mum why do you have to be so annoying!” “ Scarlet don’t be rude go to your room” So I walked into my room and jumped onto my bed with my girly cushions. I put my headphones on to block out the world around me. I listened to my favourite song by the symphony orchestra. As soon as I heard the sweet sound of the violin I was swept off into my magical place where my family is still together and where I don’t get bullied.
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