We ran down the hill, we didn’t really know where we were going, we just ran. We stopped at a big tree to catch my breath but we had to keep running because we didn’t want to get caught. We took a left turn then a right and we came to our hut, we gathered as much as we could carry. We put it all in my backpacks and ran. We ran up another hill then left towards the exit of the forest. As it came rushing towards us we freaked out.
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