Tuesday 8 August 2017
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I was sitting on my favourite scarlet cushion reading my favourite book, Watered the Flower when my annoying little sister started playing her screechy violin right beside me. I shouted “go away, I’m trying to read my book” she replied “ No! I need to practise my violin” then Mum came running in “hey hey hey girls! What’s the problem?!” “Mum! She’s playing her stupid violin but I’m trying to read!” I yelled “ok girls, you go and practise your violin in your room and you go and read your book in your room” Mum decided.
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