Monday 24 July 2017

Izzy 100WC T3W1

As I peered down the mysterious track of the deathly hallows, I knew deep down that someone was following me. Carrying on down the track I felt  series of breaths beating in my ear drums. Were they close? The leaves rustled underneath me, with twigs snapping every step I took.  All I could do was run for my life, these people were dangerous I knew it. But the questions in my head still swirled in thoughts. What's going to happen to my family? What do they want from us? With the foots step softening I finally turn around to see...

1 comment:

  1. Really nice story Izzy it struck my mind to it. I will love to see another persuasive story like this.
    :^)

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