Wednesday 28 June 2017

Izzy 100WC T2W9

The sun beamed brightly through the tinted windows, in what felt like the hottest day of the year, but then the weather changed dramatically. Just as the clock would turn from morning to noon, a huge, mysterious, grey cloud covered the sky like an enormous blanket. The temperature also suddenly changed as well! The sunny, hot, fuzzy affection turned to a freezing, stiff and icy feeling. As if on cue the rain started crashing down like waves in the sea. Soon enough thunder and lightning joined the club as well. It’s so strange how the weather changes just like that.

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