Tuesday 13 June 2017

Corbin 100WC T2W7


Dear Andrew

I feel very sorry for you when you get no light is that annoying for you? Is sierra leone a nice and friendly place? Does the job you do get you stressed? I would hate to have no light or equipment because you would get cold and sick. How many times do you see your family a month? If you had a choice would you leave your job and do something else or stay where you are saving people's lives? I will tell everyone about this so they can donate to save people’s lives.

Very Kind Regards
Corbin

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