Monday 21 August 2017
Bradley 100WC T3W5
My alarm clock beeped saying time to wake up I didn’t want to go but had to. I took the bus to and from school I liked it because you meet knew people. But you also become late. By the way my name is Logan and I go to Minnehaha Academy.Science is in first period today I was afraid I was going to be late which I was, I signed then I heard a boom and the receptionist looked down the corridor and saw flames as it came rushing towards us we ran straight out escaping with minor burns.
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