Dear Andrew:
What is it like to have someone’s life depending on you? You must be under a lot of pressure when there is an emergency. What is it feel like when a baby is born and your work is accomplished? What’s it like to stay away from your family? Do you ever think about changing jobs? Are you ever expecting yourself to fail? Or have you ever failed in delivering a baby? Did you want to be a doctor ever since you were young? If so, what created your interest in helping people? You’re a great role model Andrew!
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